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 True Griefer (Prequel to The Newest Member of Crafty Girls)

 Prologue:

 He had been running ever since they came after him. He didn't know how much longer he could do it. His world was never ending but they kept on running.

 How many more apples and bread would he waste just to get rid of them. Even the horses or pigs couldn't out run them. They got killed and he would fly up, still running.

 What was worse was when nightfall came. He hid in the mines but he knew they would find out where he was. Nobody wanted to be up in the top of the Overworld when nightfall came.

 He didn't even like it when the mobs started coming out. Those were really hard to hide from. Creepers were the worse. They blew up and it send a signal to them.

 "Maybe if I just go to the beacon, they won't find me," he said to himself. He draw out his map and searched for the beacon.

 "There it is! I just have to pass some of the ores, hit the switch and I'll be able to get out of here."

 He put his map back in his inventory and ran. He left some torches but then would grab them back, knowing that they would be able to follow him.

 He even made some glowstone but would break them and leave them in place so that they wouldn't know where he went but they could easily construct it back.

 He held his sword against his chest. The fear of mobs popping out made him more scared than them. He could try to wound them but the mobs would kill him easily.

 A Creeper hissed. He turned around and saw the green creature exploded. He flew across the area, landing hard on an ore.

 He groaned but got back up. He had to keep moving. Who knows how far or how close they would be.

 He ran and placed another torch. The torch lit a way to a path.

 "There it is!" he shouted, joyfully. He darted to the path, rushing through the walls.

 Just a few more steps to the beacon and he would be free. He could go to another one of his worlds and be able to escape them. They would never know where he went.

 An arrow whizzed pass him. No, not yet. How fast did they get here?

 "You won't take me!" he screamed. He dodged another arrow.

 A few more steps closer...

 "Gah!" An arrow pierced into his leg. Another one slashed into his arm.

 He fell down on his knees. The pain hurt him. They finally got him. There was no way of winning this game. If only he had been faster, he should of drank that potion of swiftness and he would be able to get to the beacon soon.

 He lost. They won.

 They circled around him, snickering at his whining. "Kill me," he said. "You won now. Why don't you just go and kill me. This server is yours now."

 They clashed their swords and began slicing him. "Aww, what do you want? I don't have anything. That beacon isn't for you!"

 Whoops.

 They turned their heads to the shining beacon. The glowing light allured their eyes.

 "You can't!" he yelled. "I won't let you hurt them! They mean a lot to me. Why can't you go on some other person's server? This is wrong! Why can't you...aghkk..."

 A sword divided into his chest. He sputtered for a bit and then his head rested on the ground.

 "Ready for another attack?" one of them asked the other.

 The leader grinned. "Let's do it."

 I know it's not much but just a little something for now...

 True Griefer is the prequel to The Newest Member of Crafty Girls. It's before The Newest Member basically. You ever wonder how the haunting tale of Lady's griefing past began? How she met Katerra? And what truly began The Secret Griefer Club? It turns out there's more history between Lady and Katerra....

 Well, I hope you all like this one. I'm not sure if I should put this in The Crafty Girls Fanclub as it is a prequel to the fanfic but I kind of want it as a stand alone. I don't know. Anyone want to give me suggestions?

 Chapter 1:
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:icongameplayer2012:
Gameplayer2012 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
One word : Ded.

Yeah. Ded counter is up to one.
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Lelouchu-san Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014  Student General Artist
Oh god...
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:iconladyselena55:
LadySelena55 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014  Hobbyist
DUH DUH DUH!!!!
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:iconlelouchu-san:
Lelouchu-san Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  Student General Artist
OH GODS
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Vendus Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I really like the idea but, who would the man being sliced up be? is he a part of the crafty girls? are those people at the beacon TT mary and alice? I feel like I need to ask these now...

I also would like to suggest you try to make this a series to where you do something truely terrible to the server and redeem yourself during the wake of that terrible thing and undo all the bad you have done. It'd also be nice for us to get some character development on Katerra while we can :3

and if you could put in a few pieces where we get attached to certain people and you kill them off one by one that'd be cool too.

I am just throwing ideas out here for ya..

as for craftygirls related suggestions.. maybe make a few bits about "That's how the cookie crumbles" whenever you grief as if to take a stab at tomboy and then some stuff like "No diamond is ever perfect" just to tease at TT... and as for jepray "The redstone is never finished" and as for myself you can include something like "Budder always melts in the end" you know I just want you to have some ideas for quotes that you say while griefing..

ANYWAYS good job with the Newest Member of Crafty Girls and I hope the True Griefer will be even better! x3

I hope I get to be a main character but thats too much xD anyways keep being awesome! BUH BAI!!
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LadySelena55 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014  Hobbyist
 Thanks for the ideas, Ven! Yes, you'll get more of Katerra in True Griefers. Oh, and for the guy in the story...well, that's a mystery. You don't know. (Though you'll get answers later). I kind of have an idea on the story of True Griefers (kind of a stand alone since it takes place before True Griefers but there are some things that could happen) but I appreciate your ideas...I might include other YouTubers that I didn't add to The Newest Member....some have more bigger roles in the story...and some people might be making appearances too (though maybe small ones)...
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Vendus Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I cant wait
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